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Author’s Diary Vlog with Angel Vane | Episode 70

The verdict is in from the editor on my manuscript. In Episode 70, I recap the overall impressions from the editor on The Fallen Hero. Plus, I go in-depth about the themes of edits that I need to make—author intrusion, unrealistic legal scenes, losing character’s voice, lack of setting details, and too much summary. As an added bonus, I’m cooking again. I use my brand new air fryer for the first time and stage an Air Fry battle between fresh and frozen broccoli. In the end, for me, there was a definite clear winner…